• Kjyl

  

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  Re: Ode to Rumple

  Tue, May 20, 2008 - 6:38 PM

  that does not rhyme.

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• • Mint

    

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    Re: Ode to Rumple

    Tue, May 20, 2008 - 6:48 PM

    it's art.

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  • Raven

    

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    Re: Ode to Rumple

    Wed, May 21, 2008 - 6:11 AM

    It rymes enough! skin and them/then is a sort of ryme. I use such in my songs.
    Grow & chef is the only non ryme.

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  • • Elendar

      

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      Wed, May 21, 2008 - 8:17 AM

      Heehee, poems and song lyrics don't necessarily have to rhyme either. Hell, most of my lyrics and poems never rhyme.

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    • • Kjyl

        

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        Re: Ode to Rumple

        Wed, May 21, 2008 - 1:48 PM

        well there are diffent types of poems
        
        the one mint adapted does rhyme, and they follow that pattern through the first part of the verse. the second bit is where it falls apart
        
        skin them/then does not rhyme, it does not even scan.
        
        they could be trying for disonance, but it doesn't seem like they are. it seems like they just got lazy and stopped

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      • • Ciaran

          

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          Re: Ode to Rumple

          Wed, May 21, 2008 - 2:15 PM

          Hmmm, well it apparently has not been enough to lure the trog from his hidie-hole. *poke poke*

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        • • Unsu...

            

             

            Re: Ode to Rumple

            Wed, May 21, 2008 - 2:48 PM

            Maybe somebody locked the Door from the outside..........hehehe!

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          • • Elendar

              

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              Re: Ode to Rumple

              Wed, May 21, 2008 - 7:29 PM

              Or maybe he got eaten by Amazonian Pygmy Yetis.

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            • • RuMpLe

                

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                Wed, May 21, 2008 - 8:28 PM

                I've been busy stuffing Morels with Pilly Wiggins and Faery tarts and roasting them over a fire !
                I love eating these ugly mushrooms, perhaps more than BBQ Pixie ribs. I have to return to MORDOR
                this weekend and pick Boletes form the North side of the rotting forest....

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                  Ciaran

                  

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                  Thu, May 22, 2008 - 9:05 AM

                  I found some nice yello Morels in my yard yesterday, much to my suprise. I may post some photos.
                  Even WE like these mushroom, thouhg I preffer them sauted in garlic and butter...yum.

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                • • Unsu...

                    

                     

                    Re: Ode to Rumple

                    Thu, May 22, 2008 - 10:46 PM

                    I think his bunions are giving him hell, maybe it could be a hangnail!

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        • Mint

          

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          Thu, May 22, 2008 - 3:58 AM

          I prefer the word "inventive" as opposed to "lazy."

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